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So! Thanks for the feed back guys! I <3 that webpage nart, lots of trickery behind breasts I never knew until you presented it to me.

So here's the updated drawing, how's it going so far ? The legs are obviously not finished.

Her arms are a bit short... like a t-rex.

697134002 wrote:Her arms are a bit short... like a t-rex.

Really ? could I get a second opinion on this ? The elbow goes mid body and her arms are bent after all.

I'm in no way an expert on art (or breasts, for that matter) but I think her arms look fine.

It might just be the way she's holding them. I tried doing that and, while my arms do go farther, it's not as large a difference as it first appeared.

697134002 wrote:It might just be the way she's holding them. I tried doing that and, while my arms do go farther, it's not as large a difference as it first appeared.

hmm, elaborate a bit. She does have a pair of somethings between her arms to comfortably join them.

Zinrius wrote:

697134002 wrote:It might just be the way she's holding them. I tried doing that and, while my arms do go farther, it's not as large a difference as it first appeared.

hmm, elaborate a bit. She does have a pair of somethings between her arms to comfortably join them.

I tried to compensate for that by bending my arms a bit, but holding them like that, I go farther. It might just be the pose making her arms look small, though.

Arms seem fine, hands seem ever-so-slightly too small.

The breasts just look a little off to me. While you know I'm no artist, what I would do is go off of this article:
http://www.maxriffner.com/parlor/how-to-draw-boobs

Then, draw the robe to flow over them. Also, the arms are fine. The hands look small because of how she's bent her knuckles, perhaps if you relax them a bit the hands will look more proportionate.

aflycon wrote:The breasts just look a little off to me. While you know I'm no artist, what I would do is go off of this article:
http://www.maxriffner.com/parlor/how-to-draw-boobs

Then, draw the robe to flow over them. Also, the arms are fine. The hands look small because of how she's bent her knuckles, perhaps if you relax them a bit the hands will look more proportionate.

Domo arigator Aflyconroboto

Well her arms should go up to her neck

Afly knows about boobs haha. Looks fine to me. Other thank the T-rex pose But i'm sure that is intentional. So no worries(i don't mean that you tried to make her a t-rex, just that that pose was intentional)

Updated OP

ojamamask wrote:Well her arms should go up to her neck

Elaborate please ?

I like the pose so far, and the thing that makes the arms looks weird is the hands... for the love of Azura, what is to purpose of that hand pose, its like, gaaa xD is she holding something or?

Hytro wrote:I like the pose so far, and the thing that makes the arms looks weird is the hands... for the love of Azura, what is to purpose of that hand pose, its like, gaaa xD is she holding something or?

Why make it a cliche hand pose?

Think of how weird Jack sparrow holds his hands out. In the picture she's sort of accommodating her hands on her chest.

I don't know how much clearer I can represent that.

Her boobs are placed to low down, they give off the illusion of being really saggy...
With her arms, here elbows should hit (roughly) just above the hip bone. Make her arms drop down little a bit more. The right arm looks shorter than the left.
The hands, without shading her right hand looks like it is bending sideways. i have no idea on how to fix this. (try moving the arm to ease more into the position of the hand)
Right ear looks longer than the left.
Her fingers are way to short and stubby. ahh, they are bent with no shading, never mind then! (the pinky still looks a little short though...)
/critic

Zinrius wrote:In the picture she's sort of accommodating her hands on her chest.

Thereby giving a new meaning to the nickname "Racks"

The thing I mean is, try and hold your hands like she does, try and maybe fold them a little more.
Just try and hold your hands like she does

Random: the fingers looks like that because there is no shadow and details yet, they are all bent
And the breast might be a little to low, maybe move them a tiny bit up, not much

I tried to do the hand pose with my own xD Maybe try and fold them a little more I KNOW, MY HANDS ARE DERPY... and not really female hands so kinda different

Hands are hard to draw, I know :O I cry when i have to make them myself

With the hands, her are angled pointing down a bit, Hytro yours are not. also the angle her hands are on feels uncomfortable in real life :S

You call those breasts
These are breasts
http://s3.amazonaws.com/theoatmeal-img/ ... /d_cup.jpg

Darktaint wrote:You call those breasts
These are breasts
http://s3.amazonaws.com/theoatmeal-img/ ... /d_cup.jpg

OH GOD I CAN NOT UNSEE!! HELP, SOMEONE GAUGE OUT MY EYES

random980 wrote:GAUGE

Normal-sized eyes - no need to worry.

Got breast?