The Prophecy of Escapecraft - Y u so new post?

[Sti_Jo_Lew]

/me gives Skunk an internet.

[tanisjihanis]

/me gives Skunk an internet.

[Spyboticsguy]

Give all the internets!

[LS13]

Can someone give me faster internets :(

[Sti_Jo_Lew]

nope.avi

[LS13]

[Skunk_Giant]

Wokka stepped into the room, silence following him. "I've called you here today, because this Griefer threat is getting bigger by the minute. We need the Board of Advisers to come to a solution," he stated. "We don't want war, but these Griefers are making it hard to resist."
"What I want to know," Blackadder began, "is how they got into Escapia via the portals in the first place. I thought we had spells in place that didn't allow that."
"The Cuboida spell is meant to ensure that nobody uses obsidian in the Nether, thus making the creation of a portal impossible," Darktaint added. "Clearly, these guys are bypassing that."
"There was an army there," Wokka explained. "They tried to distract Spy, make him leave his post. He didn't, and he and I fought them off, but that raises the question - if they're willing to risk that many people... then how many do they have? Multiple wizards with enough power can often bypass certain spells we have in place here, which would explain their intrusion from the Nether. The question is, how did they get so many powerful wizards?"
The group sat in silence, pondering. Finally, Lathania broke the silence. "I say we need to find Milo first. If we find Milo, we find these Griefers."
"We're working on that," Lord said, stepping into the room. "Trust me."

697 leaped forward, tackling 978 to the ground. Normally, he wouldn't have been able to take such a big prisoner to the ground, but 978 hadn't been expecting the attack. Enraged, the larger prisoner threw Proz off of him and reached for 697, who rolled to his side and kicked 978 in the face.
978 grabbed 697 by the feet and pulled him towards him, only to be stomped on by Proz. The massive prisoner slumped on the ground, unconscious.
With that, the crowd dispersed, leaving 697 and Proz alone.
"Thanks..." Proz offered.
697 stared at him for a moment. "We need to talk. I've got an offer for you."
With that, the two left.

[Sti_Jo_Lew]

/me is intrigued.

[random980]

/me is intrigued.

Also, i can has option soons?

[XxGhOsTxReCoNxX]

I wanna come back into the story

[Skunk_Giant]

I shall add you too!
Also, don't worry about the small break in things. I got a small writing job recently, so I've been devoting most of my writing time to it, but I should be complete with it by the end of the week.

[Iron_Fang]

What sort of job? A book, script ect. ?

[Skunk_Giant]

Just a small thing which I can't say too much about. Basically, I just need to write about a character in a roleplay, and I get $5 per 1000 words, so it's pretty good.

[tanisjihanis]

Rawr skunk. Here is a Tanis reminding you to keep this up. For awesome.

[Sti_Jo_Lew]

Quickly, bribe him with Internets!

[tanisjihanis]

Skunk, we love you and I gave you all the internets I could. Come back to finish this por favor ;_;

[Invunarble]

I'll give you an internet if you give me a role in the story

[Skunk_Giant]

I really want to finish this, but I've had so much stuff to do, and a lot of stuff is happening in real life.
Having said that, I have some free time right now...

No promises, but I'll try and get a post up within an hour.

[Skunk_Giant]

I didn't forget about what I said. Still working on it. Something came up, so I needed to stop for a bit, but I'm back to writing now.

[Skunk_Giant]

"A prison break."
697 stared at Proz in silence. He had repeated the phrase three times now, still trying to get it through his head.
Proz looked up at him, emotionless. "You realise that if they find us, we're done."
"They wont. I've been planning this ever since I arrived here."
"If you're so sure about this, why aren't you going on your own?" Proz asked cautiously.
"I need someone smart with me. I can see you're not like the other prisoners. You think before you act," 697 explained.
"And the catch?"
697 leaned in. "No catch, but I want some information. When we're out of here, we'll need somewhere to stay. We'll be wanted men. I want a job when I'm out of here. I want information."
"Well..."
"I know you were responsible for Towler's knowledge of the CUT operation, and rumour has it, the resignation of SneakyPie wasn't planned. I bet you played a part in that too, didn't you?"
"Look, I didn't have much to do with it. I had nothing to do with the incident with Towler... But I knew it would happen. Towler's part of a bigger game, but he and I were buddies once. He managed to tell me everything he knew through a visitor. I knew that they were expecting the CUT Agents, but I didn't tip them off. I just simply didn't tell any of the Leaders."
"So you know Towler? Get me a job with him then," 697 pleaded.
"I... guess we could try," Proz muttered. "When's this thing happening?"
"Soon. Trust me, you'll know when it happens. I'll speak to you tomorrow about the plan."

Ghost stepped outside of the room as the Leaders debated the best options to fight the Griefer attacks. He took a deep breath. The situation was getting out of hand.
He looked up towards the sun. It was about noon. The messenger was supposed to be here by now.
"Sorry I'm late," a voice quietly uttered behind him.
"Did you get the message to him?" Ghost asked.
"Yes," the messenger replied, "and-"
"Look," Ghost interrupted. "Nobody else can know about this. Not even the Leaders of Escapia. Understand?"
"Y-yes... The boss had a message for you too. He said he wants you to make sure the plan all goes well. He wants you to scout the area, make sure there's nothing we don't already know about."
"Got it. I mean, hey, Recon is my middle name," Ghost said, forcing a chuckle.
The messenger stared at him in silence. Ghost's laugh quickly stopped.
"Let him know I'll do it."

[Sti_Jo_Lew]

Hooray! Also, Ghost wtf?!?! D:

[Invunarble]

How come i'm not in it skunkeh? D: I gave you an internet...

[Skunk_Giant]

You will be, Invun. I just need to find the right place to fit you in.
That goes for everyone else wondering.

[Someguy42]

Bah, not long enough. Work faster, The Prophecy is more important than anything. Even your life does not matter compared to it!

[tanisjihanis]

Whoah there, skunk still has his own stuff to deal with. But <3 the story, please do continue ^_^

mmm ghost, who are you working for =_=

[Invunarble]

Well, I just read the whole story from the OP to here, took me about an hour, but I have to say this was amazingly well written.

Only thing that should be fixed a bit is the transitioning between stories, you have about 2-6 different events taking place during each post, it'd be alot better if you included tiny bits of each one to refresh the readers of what happened just tryin to give some feedback for you to improve on.

Yeah, like I said, besides that it's amazingly well written, and I like your choice of vocabulary to describe certain events.

Also, do you think I could have a role as being another derp employee working for CUT?

[Sti_Jo_Lew]

I don't think Mountbatten would allow that.

[Skunk_Giant]

Only thing that should be fixed a bit is the transitioning between stories, you have about 2-6 different events taking place during each post, it'd be alot better if you included tiny bits of each one to refresh the readers of what happened just tryin to give some feedback for you to improve on.

Yeah, I know, I really should.
It helps me more than anyone, because when I end up spending weeks between posts, I always like a bit of a refresher.
Also, Sti, I'm not sure Mountbatten interviews every new person to CUT. How do you think Derek made it in?

[Sti_Jo_Lew]

Child of a friend? :3

[random980]

Plot twist! Derek is Sneaky's child! (and therefore heir to the throne to... >_<)